Love:Before & After {Carpe Diem}

 

BEFORE:

One sweet kiss away

from surrendering to you

Lover, hold my heart. 

 

AFTER:

Your memory haunts

the dark corners of my soul

Lover, let me go. 

 

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For Carpe Diem today the word is
RELEASE. 

I give you both sides.

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Kirsten is a wife after years of dating, a mom after years of infertility & a lover of shoes, words, NYC and TV dramas. A storyteller and daydreamer at heart, this is the place where her stories come to be told. Thanks for visiting.

Comments

  1. Both lovely…dark and light.

  2. Kir, this is great – the dark corners of my soul, lover let me go …. Sigh!

  3. until we see both sides we never know
    beautiful

  4. Wonderful set of haiku Kirsten …

  5. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    Which side do you suggest I take? 😉

    Releasing Precious Water

  6. lovely duo of haiku ~ similar to yin and yang of life ~ change/release ~ let go ~ carol, xx

  7. Nice set on letting go on both sides!! Good one!!

  8. aint that just like life

    JzB

  9. Beautiful duo – release of going up and coming down in the swings of love and life. Well-written, Kir!

    • kpiccini@weichertrealtors.net says:

      I am so humbled by this comment, thank you so much. I can’t wait to read the others…I am growing to adore haiku so much and the community it has. All of you are wonderful, interesting, eloquent writers.

  10. Oh,how beautifully written and I loved the contrast!:-)

  11. The eagerness of the first, contrasted with the hurt of the second is very poignant, and really grips you.

  12. Wonderfully true… after the release the test comes: love or lust?

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