Holiday Shopping {Trifexxxtra}



“How about this one?”

He loosened the cap and placed the jar under my nose.

I took a deep breath, “Mmm, I like it. What’s it called?”

“Does it matter?” he teased , letting his fingers brush  the front of my sweater, bringing my nipples to a delicate, aching point.

Blushing, want and warmth coated my panties.

I wrapped my fingers around his and tried not to moan, leaning into him instead and placing a small bite at the top of his shoulder to stem the lust swirling in my limbs.

“I’ll be right back.” he whispered against my cheek as he moved toward the cash register.

A few moments later, a bag swinging from his fingertips, he pulled me close and his mouth met mine.

“Follow me.” he urged leading me out of the store and along the sidewalks of the outdoor shopping center, his hand sneaking up the back of my sweater, until we reached a darkened corner behind the movie theaters. Pushing me up against the brick wall he opened the bag and twisted the top off the candle, trailing his fingers against the wax and pushing my skirt up to rub the scent into my thighs.

Sinking to his knees, I felt his breath against my shaved skin as his tongue made quick work of finding my clit. So I made even quicker work of coming for him.

“I love you …” he breathed as my spasms pulsed against his lips and my legs shook with the sweet release.

“I want a taste…” I panted, pulling him to standing and plunging my tongue into his mouth where I tasted lust, peppermint and the tiniest hint of sandalwood.

“What’s it called?”

Eskimo Kiss.”

“Hmmm…” I moaned as I fiddled with his belt and sunk to my knees.

Reaching for the jar to coat my own fingers, I touched him with the tip of my tongue, “How seasonally appropriate.”



Trifecta this weekend is all about Erotica. 
I love writing this kind of piece, and I hope that you enjoyed reading it. 

Sort of like a good romp for both of us. 

The prompt:
We are asking for an open write this week–33 to 333 words of erotic writing.  No specific words need to be used, and we aren’t necessarily banning any either.  If you want to see what our writers came up with last year, click on over and check them out.  This year we are imposing one additional limitation: we are not accepting any entries that deal with sexual violence.  We want this to be a celebration of sensuality.  Posts that contain graphic violence will be immediately deleted from our collection. –

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Kirsten is a wife after years of dating, a mom after years of infertility & a lover of shoes, words, NYC and TV dramas. A storyteller and daydreamer at heart, this is the place where her stories come to be told. Thanks for visiting.


  1. Goodness this is spicy……………and…against the wall…..gorgeous…you have me thinking things!
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  2. This was a great romp, Kir! I was cold, but I don’t need an extra sweater any more;)
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    • says:

      Val! :)
      It wasn’t too much? (although I did love writing this…my little secret passion. )
      Hope you had a great weekend my friend.

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  4. Gosh Kir, this weekend is gonna be so hot! Your entry is so damn sexy and now all my mental chords are pulled tight 😛

    • says:

      I was thinking the same thing as I read all of them. Fanning myself all weekend. 😉

      hoping you had a wonderful weekend my friend.

  5. Wow indeed! This is so steamy. :)
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    • says:

      I hope it was steamy in a good way. I am new at writing like this, but I like it.
      Thank you so much for visiting

  6. Oh, giggle!!! This is perfection. Love that last line.
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    • says:

      the last line was my favorite part. 😉
      (well not really, but it was fun to write. Hee)

      thank you for the visit.

  7. I love this wonderful sexy holiday Trifexxtra. Very hot!

  8. Oh my…. a much deserved warning! Well written though.
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  9. Oh my. This is fantastic, Kir. The dialogue, the pace, the intensity, the release. Exquisite.
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  10. Peppermint; I’ve heard that it’s good for this 😀
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  11. Oh, yeahhhh! If holiday shopping were always this … um … enjoyable, I wouldn’t shop online as much. 😉

    I’m completely enamored with this couple. I love their teasing nature and the way they steal little naughty touches. (If Hubs ever stops touching my boobs in public, I’ll know our marriage is in serious trouble–haha!) Their familiarity is so sexy. They know how to push each others buttons (pun completely intended), and that’s hot.

    A couple proofreading notes: You’re missing “of” in “… top [of] his shoulder …” and you need to change “make” to “made” in “… his tongue make quick work …”

    I had no doubt you would rise to the challenge. I loved this, my dear friend. You rocked it!
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  12. Well, now I don’t need any coffee to keep warm! Ivy is right–you rocked this!

  13. Wowza, Kir! I hope you joined in on writing that historical fiction erotica someone posted on FB about a month ago! This was HOT!
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  14. Seasonally spicy. :)

  15. wow. raw and hot. :-)

  16. Wow. This was very sexy and spicy. Loved how the couple couldn’t wait to get out of the store and then found the closest wall. :) I wasn’t around in the blog world for this last year.

  17. ohmygoodness kir! This is sweet and sexy.

  18. Perfect scene – the right mix of explicit and emotional, and so well conveyed – it packed a real erotic punch

  19. I loved the theme, and against the wall behind the movies is pretty much the sexiest place on earth!
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  20. Yowza!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  21. Forgot to tell you, come visit me as anonymous (my kids wouldn’t quite like my rendition ;-)).
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  22. Oh this is exquisite :-)
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  23. Wow! Well done, Kir!!
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  24. Whoa! If every shopping trip ended like this, that would be the end of all that male moaning. Oh, wait.
    If every shopping trip ended like this, that would certainly change the tone of male moaning.
    Love it, Kir!
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  25. Ohhh this is sinfully delightful! Very well done.
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  26. You know Kir,when I read about this challenge on Friday night,last week’s entry from you was the first to come to my mind & I thought,”Ah,Kir will run away with this one-it’s going to be a cake walk for her!” .And,now reading your piece,I realized I was so right-your piece has romantic and erotic touches-both subtle and bold – playing on the reader’s imagination!Loved this!
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  27. You know how I love the spicy stuff, but I love that you kept it sweet, too. Not too far from your usual public offerings.
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  28. totally doing this at yankee candle this weekend! TOTALLY.
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