Don’t Worry, You Won’t Feel a Thing {100 Word Challenge/Studio30Plus}

What can I offer you, sir?

A princess or a whore?

A gal you can forgive and (promptly) forget?

How about a passionate muse you might not forget and most certainly never forgive for the destruction of your heart?

Do you inhale a little too slowly

or do you tend to exhale a little too quickly

when you experience the sudden loss of oxygen at this altitude?

Tell me..

have you ever;

taken one for the team,

taken one on the cheek,

been quite taken with

and then had all you  loved taken away?

Can you

give up,

give in

or simply give yourself over for the greater good?

Because this one

(yesirree,  this girlie right here)

has a love that’s quick and lethal

but (rest assured)

she’s worth dying for.

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Studio30Plus prompt of the week comes from Tara (she’s amazing) 

“quick and lethal” 

100 Word Writing Prompt

Velvet Verbosity’s 100 Word Challenge

Word of the week is

Inhaled

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Kirsten is a wife after years of dating, a mom after years of infertility & a lover of shoes, words, NYC and TV dramas. A storyteller and daydreamer at heart, this is the place where her stories come to be told. Thanks for visiting.

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  1. Lyssa Medana
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    How many men are really up to THAT challenge! LM x

    • he’d have to be a man among men for sure.
      Hope you enjoyed this little ditty Lyssa. Getting my piece ready for your challenge. :)

  2. You’ve been giving us such different types of pieces lately Kir. I’m really enjoying this new poetical style
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  3. Just wanted to say … love it!
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  4. WOW!!! Like you mentioned in an earlier comment…that would have to be quite a man!!! And she scare me a bit in an ohmygawdd she’s awesome and dirty and mysterious and oh momma I wouldn’t mess with her kind of way!!!

  5. This was absolutely amazing. I don’t think I took a breath until I finished reading. Adding this to my favorites list.
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  6. Just grab that bandaid and pull it off in one swift motion! 😉
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  7. That’s sheer perfection Kir, and what an offer being made!
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  8. I like it, but I’m not sure exactly why. I think it’s because I’ve been there, more or less. Life wasn’t on the line – not literally – but *a* life did teeter, waiting for me and *that* girl to take our respective steps.

    Anyway, a great take on the prompt, and I’m liking this staccato style you’ve used a couple of times, lately. Exciting writing!
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