Chains of Love {Gargleblaster}

 

There was never any doubt,

from the moment your eyes caught mine

with your voice lilting me to your side,

that I would sit (obediently) in the sanctuary of your love.

 

You never need to ask,

My song is forever your name.

 

Garlgleblaster this week:
Why does the caged bird sing?
(Well it’s Love of course!)

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Kirsten is a wife after years of dating, a mom after years of infertility & a lover of shoes, words, NYC and TV dramas. A storyteller and daydreamer at heart, this is the place where her stories come to be told. Thanks for visiting.

Comments

  1. I like the lyrical obedience in this piece.

  2. A charming piece. I love the last line. Good one!
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  3. Kir, your language is always so poetic. I love the lines “your voice lilting me to your side” and “in the sanctuary of your love.” Very nice. Karen
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  4. Uplifting and hopelessly romantic i.e. what you do best :-)
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  5. “The sanctuary of your love” is an exquisite image.
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  6. I loved this, as always.
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  7. We all want to be loved, no doubt about it…
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  8. There is a peace and sweetness in this, lovely.
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  9. The obedient thing has me wondering if there’s something else going on behind what looks like a beautiful love story.
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  10. Love is so beautiful especially when it’s real.
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  11. Ohhhhhh. So lovely. Gorgeous, Kir.
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  12. “My song is forever your name”…so romantic! I have goose bumps!
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  13. This is really nice, Kir. :-)
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  14. The parenthetical ‘obedient’ and the title of this piece combine together to hint at a multi-faceted back-story to this. Great word choices!
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  15. Ah, eternal love… if such a thing exists, this would fit that perfectly :) No, I am not being a cynic. Just a bad day 😀
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  16. Your closing line is just gorgeous, Kir! The chains and obedience… another, more troubling, side of it : )
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  17. Beautiful and lyrical.
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  18. Nicely written.. cant get any better..
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  19. I really enjoyed this.
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  20. Really enjoyed this! I just missed getting in on this challenge. By the time I figured out what to write there were already 42 entries. Maybe next week! ♥♥
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  21. You continue to blow me away with your choice of words, your poetic phrasing.
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