Smoke Signals

When he comes calling

you’ll oblige the fates

and follow;

like a moth to a flame

or a ship to the rocks lured by a mermaid’s song.

Later all you’ll wonder is why it’s unlawful to yell “fire” in a crowded theater.

What’s your sign?

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Kirsten is a wife after years of dating, a mom after years of infertility & a lover of shoes, words, NYC and TV dramas. A storyteller and daydreamer at heart, this is the place where her stories come to be told. Thanks for visiting.

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  1. Oooh, gave me the chills. Nice job.
    Cindy Knapper recently shared…What’s Your Sign?My Profile

  2. Really interesting direction! My favourite line is the mermaid metaphor – a haunting image! Good job!
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  3. Loved the mermaid line. That was fabulous! Definitely time to leave when someone yells fire~ Great job on the prompts~ ♥
    Kathy Combs recently shared…It’s Time!My Profile

  4. I love the emotions you create here, Kir :)
    Soumyaa Verma recently shared…What’s your sign?- It’s EuphoricMy Profile

  5. I love the description of an irresistible force.
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  6. I’m a huge, HUGE fan of Homer’s Odyssey so I love any reference to the Sirens. I’d be curious to know what factored into your decision to use the word “mermaid” specifically. So the overall picture I’m getting is a bad date with a really cute guy. Am I projecting too much? 😉

  7. Shudder! Good one. :-)
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  8. Love the fates, the mermaid, and the ominous ending. Stellar :-)
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  9. This one made me think of dungeons and dubloons of gold under the sea :) Nice take!
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  10. I love the fantasy imagery here. I could see it play out in my mind. Beautiful piece, Kir.

  11. Great piece

  12. Very strong theme of coming together/scattering. your poem pulsed, Kir! Nicely done!
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  13. This is lovely, Kir. I like the use of second person POV. It works so well.
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  14. Yes… sometimes you just can’t fight the siren’s call.
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